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5 Great Quotations about Story Endings

“There is 000000001vno real ending. It’s just the place where you stop the story.” - Frank Herbert

“You always get more respect when you don’t have a happy ending.” - Julia Quinn

“The hard part about writing a novel is finishing it.” - Ernest Hemingway

“If you have a problem with the third act, the real problem is in the first act.” - Billy Wilder

“End with an image and don’t explain.” - Stanley Kunitz

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Rising Action Main Character Must Fail

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Writing for the web: Shorter is better

When writing 00000000000000000sonline text, short is better than long. Short articles are easy to glean information from, and if it’s useful material, the visitor will continue by clicking onto another of your pages. The longer the piece, however, the more the visitor must annoyingly scroll to read additional content – especially on mobile phones, which is how more and more of your website visitors are accessing you – and can have difficulty locating info when scrolling back up.

A short piece runs up to 700 words in length. At the same time of ensuring you don’t go too long, make sure you don’t offer too little. After all, if you go fewer than 300 words, why access the page? There likely won’t be enough information on the page to make it worth visiting.

There are a number of guidelines to ensure your text ends up being short rather than long:
Figure out what’s important – Writing short doesn’t mean you skimp on research. You need to understood your topic fully and identify what you will zero in on.
Stay focused – Avoid meandering starts and don’t go off on tangents. Think “this is the one key takeaway I want readers to get from the piece” and distill your explanations down to their essence with two or three supporting points.
Be concise – Minimize unnecessary words. Use active voice and write tightly. Don’t repeat ideas; for example, a conclusion paragraph that summarize the page’s text is superfluous.
Give specific, meaningful details/examples – Your writing is more evocative when you are exact. Don’t write “The river was beautiful” but “Sunlight sparkled off the river.” The latter’s few extra letters actually provide far more information than the briefer former example.
Limit quotation length – Favor the pithy over the rambling. If you can say it better in your own words, then do so.
Maintain an appetizer mentality – Your blog and website text is all about getting visitors interested in your book, which is the main course. Don’t fill them up with the website but give them enough to get them to at least take a look at if not buy your book.

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Why create your own indie publishing company?

Most authors 00000000000000000w when they self-publish are satisfied with simply being a sole proprietor, but they can gain significantly by creating an independent publishing company.

As the author, you own the publishing company, which in turn owns the book’s ISBN. On every book you print, the publishing company is listed on the title and the half-title pages.

While this may sound like going through a lot of rigmarole, there actually are a number of advantages to it:
Looks more professional – You can register ISBN and LCCN under your company, which looks better to traditionalists than listing “CreateSpace” or your name as the publisher.
Allows you to separate your business finances from your personal finances – While this isn’t necessary in a sole proprietorship, some people prefer to do so; of course, to separate the two, you need to have an actual business.
Creates options for you – Your business doesn’t have to be limited to publishing only your books; as an independent publisher, you can publish other authors’ books as well as set up services such as formatting and cover design all under your publishing company’s umbrella.
Pick up recognition as a publisher – Publishers can enter their works in contests and receive other recognitions – all of which boost book sales – that authors otherwise don’t have access to.
Increase your own production efficiency – Even if your business never publishes other authors’ books, knowing how to perform every step in the publishing process actually can improve the speed and save you money in getting out your own books.

The downside to creating your own self-publishing company is that you may need to do some extra work and spend a little extra money. Depending on how you name your company, you may need to file paperwork with your city/county/state (and there’s a filing fee), do an extra set of taxes (one for your company and one for personal income tax), and maintain an additional bank account. But most of that work and expense comes up front when you first form your business.

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Psst, should I say that aloud or out loud?

Ever stop Speech-bubble-41392_1280writing and say “Huh?!” aloud when deciding if aloud or out loud should be used in your story?

Aloud is an adverb meaning “using the voice so it can be heard.” It excludes whispering. Hence, Jeff finally said aloud all that he’d been thinking for the past month.

Out loud – which is two words – is an adverbial phrase meaning “loud enough to be heard, often without restraint.” To wit, “Not again!” Laura said out loud.

While the two terms essentially are interchangeable, out loud can imply a sudden shout, scream or other human-made noise. Something said out loud probably was done so without thinking or “without restraint.” Because of this, you’ll most commonly see out loud paired with blurt or laugh, as in “That’s stupid!” a man blurted from the back of the crowd out loud.

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5 Sci-fi Writing Prompts That Will Motivate You

Science fiction Space-telescope-532989_1920stories typically arise from a novum, a scientifically plausible concept that is a “reality” in the tale. The novum might be an mechanical device like robot servants, artificial intelligence, or faster-than-light spacecraft; it also can be a hypothetical idea such as “The Earth is a scientific experiment run by aliens to determine the meaning of life” or “The government outlaws books.” The author then asks “What if?” exploring how the world with this novum is different than ours.

Among the problems of many novice science fiction writers is instead of introducing a new novum they rely on used furniture – that is, they borrow novums from popular SF series. After all, how many novels have you read that use starships exploring the galaxy for the Earth-based Federation? Barely changing names to appear as if you are not appropriating – a starcraft seeking M-class worlds for the Earth-centered Alliance – still doesn’t cut it as original or fully using the potential that science fiction offers to examine our culture or humanity.

To help SF writers, here are some novums of potential near-future inventions from which stories could be built:

Deuterium mining
What if city-sized communities floated on the oceans to mine deuterium from seawater for fusion fuel? What would life be like in such a community?

Geoneutrino satellites
What if space-based geoneutrino telescopes allow high-resolution imaging of the Earth’s interior? What positive effects does this yield for mankind?

Microwave-powered rockets
What if gyrotron microwave arrays could beam light rockets into orbit? How does this dramatic reduction in the cost of leaving the planet open up space exploration?

Optogenetics
What if optogenetics – the use of light to control neurons in living cells – allows disorders such as Parkinson’s, Alzheimer’s, autism and schizophrenia to be cured? How do those who suffered from such diseases reintegrate themselves into society?

Sigma Draconis colonization
What if a habitable planet were found orbiting this nearby but old star? Would the expedition find the ruins of an ancient civilization there?

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6 Secrets to Creating and Sustaining Suspense

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How to create suspense in your story  
Use reversals to increase suspense in story  
Give readers sleepless nights with narrative drive 
Maintain sense of tension through pace 
Make story interesting by establishing stakes 
Maintain tone by avoiding subjective tension 

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5 Great Quotations about Show Don’t Tell

“You don’t 000000001y have to say everything to say something.” - Beth Moore

“What I like in a good author is not what he says, but what he whispers.” - Logan Pearsall Smith

“Don’t say it was delightful; make us say delightful when we’ve read the description.” - C.S. Lewis

“Be sure not to discuss your hero’s state of mind. Make it clear from his actions.” - Anton Chekhov

“A successful book is not made of what is in it, but what is left out of it.” - Mark Twain

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Affirmation 6 Mar 3

Every success story begins with a dream. If you dream of being a professional, published author, that success story requires believing in yourself and in knowing that your efforts will lead to triumph. Read the motivational blog entry this quotation came from by clicking on the quote card.

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