• Use concrete details to make writing more vivid
• Ensure descriptive details aren’t just chrome
• Don’t leave reader in fog with vague descriptions
• Keep freeze-frame in story brief, relevant
• Avoid rear-view mirror descriptions in stories
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06/05/2017
5 Tips to Make Your Writing More Descriptive
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