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Four writing prompts: Reclaiming

Avoid inappropriate mystery to create suspense

One of the 0060greatest temptations of novice writers is to include in their stories an enigma even though it doesn’t move the story forward. Authors who do this are guilty of committing the sin of an inappropriate mystery.

While using a mystery is a good technique to build tension, dramatic follow-up is expected. Readers otherwise will recognize the suspense as false and feel cheated.

Some common examples of an inappropriate mystery include:
Character speaks opaquely – When a character is deliberately being coy or deliberately hiding some fact in dialogue, then what is meant needs to later be revealed and should be a key part of the plot’s development.
Character goes “offstage” (out of the story) to do things – Should a character leave the story’s setting for another location, a reason should be given for their departure, if not at the time of the parting then in a scene that follows.
A development in the plot is referred to indirectly – Any event a character experiences that affects the plot needs to be written rather then obliquely referred to. For example, when a character goes “offstage,” then his experience there needs to be shown onstage in a scene, unless it’s irrelevant to the story (such as going to sleep for the night).

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