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Writing Inspiration: Like the rising sun, my writing casts an ever-widening light upon the world

The hours 01jbefore dawn mark the darkest hours, when seeing even a few feet in front of you is difficult. As night’s blanket has covered the world for several hours, the wind blows its coldest and the ground is at its dampest.

And then, at last, a thin line of orange appears on the horizon. The sky about it lightens from an impenetrable black to a friendly blue, and soon tree leaves and sides of buildings shimmer in the glow of the rising sun. Dawn reawakens the world, gives it a fresh start, a new hope.

Your writing – once published – can have the same effect.

As a unique human being, you can offer the world a perspective that was never considered before, can synthesize disparate ideas that offer new insights and solutions, can inspire people to work for great causes and to shift their views away from those that are dark and unjust.

Granted, few books have had such a remarkable impact that they utterly altered human history. But each book published contributes, for better or for worse, to the improvement of humanity. Movements cannot occur, after all, without the press and push of millions of individuals; likewise, shifts in consciousness often occur when thousands of books on an idea are published. Perhaps your book is not as revolutionary as Mohammed’s Koran or Darwin’s On the Origin of Species, but it may help direct a new course in thinking that allows for a work of such magnitude to make its impact.

Or perhaps your book will inspire a lone, single reader to take up writing or a cause, and her efforts lead to a titanic change in history. Or perhaps she will pass those ideas on to one of her children, who will have such an effect. History is littered with stories and poems and songs that energized others to improve the world. Perhaps such works of art are relegated to footnote status, but their impact reshaped and now drives civilization.

By never publishing, though, you shun an opportunity to make a positive difference. You diminish your potential to change the world.

You allow the world to remain in blackness a little longer.

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Do Kindle DP pre-orders help or hinder sales?

As of summer Ebook 112014, indie authors can take pre-orders for their ebooks published on Kindle DP. But do pre-orders make good marketing sense?

That depends where you’re at as an author.

The pre-order will help a couple of different indie authors. First, it will be useful for authors who do a lot of promotional activities via mailing lists and social media, as it extends the publicity period for the book. They now can list the book on Amazon.com and Goodreads to promote pre-orders, then on the book’s launch date can change up the publicity campaign to “Book has been released!” Should pre-orders put them on Amazon.com’s Top 100 bestseller list for the ebook’s category, that adds a third layer of publicity. Secondly, pre-orders will be useful for writers of series novels. By taking pre-orders, those authors can decrease the amount of time between book releases, taking advantage of fan and reader interest to land sales.

For those authors whose pre-orders will take a chunk out of sizable sales on their book’s release day, though, it’s a bad strategy. Pre-order sales don’t help a book’s release date ranking. Suppose for example that sales of a 1000 books likely will get an author into the Top 100 bestsellers list for that ebook’s category and about that many sales are anticipated. If pre-orders amount to 700 sales, leaving the author with only 300 sales on launch date, then pre-orders have knocked the book off the bestseller list simply because it was released.

Need an editor? Having your book, business document or academic paper proofread or edited before submitting it can prove invaluable. In an economic climate where you face heavy competition, your writing needs a second eye to give you the edge. Whether you come from a big city like Hartford, Connecticut, or a small town like Hebron, New Hampshire, I can provide that second eye.



Writing inspiration: Read their inspirations

If you 240_F_122508432_dU5YK00rlT2Htr2Syk0GBy77RBlCyJ4Sreally want to learn the craft of writing from your favorite authors, read their inspirations. You typically can find them through his/her personal website or a Wikipedia article. You’ll be surprised how their best stories don’t copy those inspirations, which instead were a catalyst for greater creativity.

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A change in the text: Amend vs. emend

If only 01k we could alter some writers’ bad habits regarding the words amend and emend!

Amend is a verb meaning to change, usually for the better or to at least set something right. For example, The Los Angeles City Council plans to amend the city charter.

Emend is a verb meaning to improve by editing and typically is limited to text. To wit, The New York City mayor’s secretary planned to emend his letter by adding a comma.

Hopefully, you now will not not need to emend your first draft when either of these words appear in your manunscripts!

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Writing Prompt: Draw upon personal turmoil

Suffering 01k from writer’s block or need to add some spunk to your writing? The problem may be that you need to change up your routine. To that end, try this tip:

Think of a time you’ve faced personal turmoil in your life. Write a page about the emotions you experienced during that difficult time.

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Avoid writing schizophrenic story

Does your 4837657_e0fadf2495story belong in therapy? Perhaps one portion of it appears to be in conflict with another portion, maybe over tone or theme.

The problem might be that we as authors haven’t shaped the story enough during its formative stages to ensure the plot, characters and message can adequately address conflicts, motivations and ideas.

Consider allowing more discomfort and unhappy circumstances to appear in your story; this may create the right situations so your story can more adequately present and work through plot conflicts, character motivations, and thematic ideas.

Need an editor? Having your book, business document or academic paper proofread or edited before submitting it can prove invaluable. In an economic climate where you face heavy competition, your writing needs a second eye to give you the edge. Whether you come from a big city like Rochester, New York, or a small town like Beech Bottom, West Virginia, I can provide that second eye.


Five Great Quotations about Books

“Those who 01k find ugly meanings in beautiful things are corrupt without being charming. This is a fault. Those who find beautiful meanings in beautiful things are the cultivated. For these there is hope. They are the elect to whom beautiful things mean only Beauty. There is no such thing as a moral or an immoral book. Books are well written, or badly written. That is all.” - Oscar Wilde

“I firmly believe every book was meant to be written.” - Marchette Chute

“The books we think we ought to read are poky, dull, and dry/The books that we would like to read we are ashamed to buy/The books that people talk about we never can recall/And the books that people give us, oh, they're the worst of all.” - Carolyn Wells

“What an astonishing thing a book is. It's a flat object made from a tree with flexible parts on which are imprinted lots of funny dark squiggles. But one glance at it and you're inside the mind of another person, maybe somebody dead for thousands of years. Across the millennia, an author is speaking clearly and silently inside your head, directly to you. Writing is perhaps the greatest of human inventions, binding together people who never knew each other, citizens of distant epochs. Books break the shackles of time. A book is proof that humans are capable of working magic.” - Carl Sagan

“Where is human nature so weak as in the bookstore?” - Henry Ward Beecher

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I refuse to give up on my writing because I haven’t explored every possible way to revise it.

Since writers 13051697_10153379586015216_6139385127685257516_nare close to their work – the universe for the story that is in a writer’s head always is larger than the universe for the story that is on paper – they often may not recognize that a passage needs to be revised. Because of this, a troubled paragraph or chapter may go unrecognized by the writer…and if it is recognized, the writer may have no idea how to revise it.

Don’t give up on a passage and decide to let it stand simply because you’re unclear how to help it work better, though. That simply cheats your reader and your story. You wouldn’t give up on your child simply because you’re uncertain how to help her, after all, so why treat your story with any less dignity?

If you’re thinking of quitting on a passage – or even giving up on the entire writing project – you’re simply responding with emotion, specifically frustration and maybe even a little fear or anger. Such an intense reaction arises from self-doubt about your ability to get the story right.

Indeed, a lot of writing is trial and error. Sometimes what at the outset seems like a middling idea actually turns out to be the best cure. Sometimes what initially appears to be a fantastic idea turns out to be the entirely wrong prescription.

The beauty of writing is that there always are a number of ways to solve any given problem. Suppose the result of your main character’s effort to resolve a problem doesn’t deliver the necessary gravitas to help your protagonist grow. Simply have your character take an entirely tact toward resolving the issue, specifically one that leads to the result you desire. There are thousands of different approaches your main character might take. Or you might instead tweak the result. Or you might modify how the character grows through the story.

You may need to outline or pen several drafts of a scene to make it work. Whatever you do, keep at it. The satisfaction you feel upon succeeding will be the worth the effort.

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Editing client publishes debut YA novel

An editing Warren Shader Zombie Hall Passclient of mine has published his first young adult novel, “Zombie Hall Pass.” Written for upper elementary and middle school students, Warren Schader’s novel begins with a green mist pouring out of the gym and turning people into zombies. John Hardy – the middle school nerd – joins forces with his close friend Big Mike and the popular girl Melissa, as the unlikely trio use knowledge from video games and comics to solve the mystery of the outbreak. Along the way, they meet unique characters, such as Bobby the photo room “survivor” and the scraggily-haired janitor Mr. Wiggins. And what does Agent Wazowskiburg of B.R.A.T.S. have to do with anything? The novel is available online.

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Writing inspiration: Model a story

Modeling Strawberry-blonde-haircollege-co-edweight-110-poundsheight-5-foot-threesan-diegopeachy-complexi-889077947the stories (or chapters) of a favorite author forces you to think about how a story is structured and the characters developed, making writing of your own stories easier later on. Select a favorite short story or chapter of only 5-10 pages and follow its format sentence-by-sentence as writing your own.

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